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tazong

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This is a house that is for sale as a building plot so will most likley be demolished when a buyer has been found so i decided to preserve whats left to video before the bulldozers come in.
This is my very first exploration video so would greatly appreciate any comments good and bad or any advice you have on making a better final product.
Many thanks and i hope you enjoy :)

 
I'm not too keen on videos because usually the person holding the camera tends to waver it around and I get dizzy. But in your case - pretty good. The good points: you have gone all around the building allowing the viewer to see how much thrashed it is, your movements are slow so the viewer does not get dizzy with quick camera movements, you cover all of the inside of the building. Not bad points but a couple of niggles: a running commentary would be nice, please don't use bad language as you never know who is watching and might be a bit sensitive about the use of bad language. That's all. If you want a few hints there is a Canadian woman called Tiki Trex on You Tube. Have a watch at her videos for a few pointers.
 
hi , thank you for the feedback, in 99.9% of my videos I don't ever swear but I did notice I did swear once in the video and I have taken that on board.
aS for the running commentary as it was my first video wanted it to be as natraul as possible but even thou I do talk maybe I should have put some more running commentary on top.
I do watch many exploration videos including the Canadian lady you mentioned.
Thank you for the good feedback.
 
I too don't really like videos, but credit where credit is due I thought it was pretty good, I like that the still shots were included for a slightly different perspective of the views. nowt wrong with that :D
 
I too don't really like videos, but credit where credit is due I thought it was pretty good, I like that the still shots were included for a slightly different perspective of the views. nowt wrong with that :D

Thank you kindly , to be honest I think this will be my overall style - lots of video footage with the photos I take inter spenced in to the video and where possible drone footage with a music overlay, I really don't want to fly the drone with people around mainly for safety's sake.
Thank you for your kind feedback
:)
 

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